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Hello my dears!

I have kind of been tagged by Astrorella with Hitomi as my oc. This looked like fun, so I wanted to do it! :D


Rules:

1- Post these rules.
2- Post 8 facts about your character.
3- Tag 8 other characters.
4- Post their names along with their creators' avatars.
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My Naruto OC Hitomi:


Oboroyo by invisibleninja12


(1)
Hitomi's favorite hobby is people.


She takes great pleasure in meeting and getting to know others, as well as predicting their thoughts and future actions. Hitomi is very good at getting people to like her, because she knows what each individual unconsciously wants and gives it to them. She is manipulative, but usually in a harmless way. She understands how people tick, and can bring out the best or worst in them, depending on what she wants. Most people have no idea that everything she says and does in front of them has been calculated in her brain.
When first meeting someone, she will use tactics to quickly narrow down what that person does and doesn't like. This can be seen when she first interacts with Kakuzu. She talks a bit, and probes, until he snaps at her slightly. Once this happens, she has figured out the general things that annoy him, and she successfully avoids annoying him the rest of the journey. She offers a piece of information about herself, waiting to see if he will take the bait and do the same. He does, surprisingly, and so, she gets what she really wants- information. 

Hitomi seeks information on everyone. She is a spy and assassin, so it is logical that she would want to know things about people. She takes great joy in getting raw emotions out of people, and learning their innermost thoughts and feelings, so she can better predict their actions.

But Hitomi is not a sociopath. She is actually very empathetic in nature. She genuinely enjoys getting to know others and making allies in itself, and she truly cares about what others have to say. This is important to know, since it is easy to assume that everything about her is an act. 

People have a hard time figuring her out. Few actually get to know her on a personal level, but those who do usually don't know what to think of her. She is an enigma to most, since her personality can change in different situations. This is due to the fact that she rarely lets people in. She is always mysterious, despite her outgoing nature. Even when she talks a lot, you don't learn anything about her. You only know what she wants you to know. She has trust issues, and rightfully so. You can't be trusting if you have an occupation like hers. And she was also raised to think this way.

(The only person Hitomi does not bother putting on an act for is Sasuke. She doesn't like him (you will find out why later), and she sees no benefit to hiding this fact from others. Since no one really thinks Sasuke is personable anyway, it doesn't hurt her reputation to openly diss him. She doesn't need anything from Sasuke, so she has no motive to hide her feelings. And although she does dislike him, she enjoys his company somewhat, since she doesn't really show her true distaste towards anyone besides him. She also still enjoys studying him and how he reacts to things.)

(2)
She loves to fight, and has has a code to her fighting.


Hitomi fantasizes about battle all the time. She constantly looks at those around her and imagines what fighting them would be like and how to win against them. She wants to be prepared in any situation. Hitomi also has "guidelines" to her fighting. She prefers an honest duel, and she wants to treat her opponents with respect. Even when she is out to assassinate someone, she always makes herself known to them first (partly because she likes to see their fear). She takes extra pleasure in killing her targets if she thinks are horrible people. She always does research on her targets before just killing them.

She will abandon this code of "up-frontness" if she thinks the only way to survive is to fight dirty. She can be really nasty and sadistic when she wants to be. It's best not to bring out that side of her. 

When it comes to those who are not worthy of a real battle who attempt to kill her, she will not hesitate to take them out. If someone attempts to kill a person who can't defend themselves, or a person she is protecting, she will immediately try to kill them, no games. Once she gets into "kill" mode, the fight will most likely be over in seconds, because she will usually slice the opponent's neck open or completely behead them. She loves the sight of her defeated opponent's blood. 

(3)
Hitomi does not have a home.


She makes a comment to Kakuzu about this, stating that she has never had a home village. This confused Kakuzu, since in that day and age, all ninja are trained in ninja villages, because they need to be registered. Hitomi is not registered anywhere. I would explain why, but that is a big part of what makes her mysterious, so I won't say ;) All you need to know is that she grew up moving around the continent, and that she was always on the run and hiding as a child. And because no one knows who she really is, she technically does not exist.

(4)
Hitomi is a master of Taijutsu and Kenjutsu (sword fighting)


I made her to be more like a traditional ninja, so her jutsus are less flashy, and more practical. She enjoys hand-to-hand combat the most. She is also very good at getting close enough to her opponents to use close-combat techniques. Deidara comments on her speed when first crossing paths with her. She has a sword to his throat in no time at all (but Deidara always has his own tricks up his sleeve). Her sword is just a normal sword. It's just really sharp, and when in her hands, very deadly. 

I designed her outfit to actually suit her hand to hand combat, despite what it may look like at first. Her long sleeves are made of a thick fabric, and can be used to conceal her hand movements. She can also use them to her advantage by wrapping them around a weapons and pulling them out of her opponent's hands. Her top is sturdy, and breathable. She has extra fabric that looks like a skirt on her front and back, and she can use them as bandages. She wears high heels, but they have sharp edges (for kicking) and because there is a heel, she can hide a small blade in each shoe easily. She does show her midriff and a bit of her thighs and chest, but that is her personal preference. She likes to be able to "breathe" in her clothing, and expose some skin. And because no one can get past her defense, it doesn't make a difference whether she is covered or not.

(5)
No one knows what Hitomi really looks like. 


You find out in the 3rd chapter of my comic that she is nicknamed "Chizome," which means "blood-stained". You also learn that no one has ever heard of her before 6 months ago in the story. Kakuzu mentions that no one knows her true face, and even though she is walking in front of him at the time with her true face, he doesn't know that. Deidara first meets her when she is in a disguise, and when she transforms in front of him, he wonders why she bothered to hide herself, and if she does it all the time. And she does. 

The reason that "Chizome" didn't exist before six months ago is because she didn't want to be on record. She was an assassin before people knew about her, but she changed her appearance so often, it was impossible to track her or even know it was the same assassin. Since Hitomi never had a home village, and has never been on record, no one even knew she existed. 6 months ago, she chose to reveal herself, and the reason for that... is a secret for now hehe. After she did this, those who hired her came up with the nickname, since she is known to be thorough and leave a lot of blood pooling around her victims.

Hitomi is showing her real appearance more often currently because she wants to. Hitomi seeks companionship, and knows that will never happen unless people see her repeatedly looking the same. It also takes less chakra haha.

Note: The only people who know her real name so far are Orochimaru, Kabuto, Sasuke, Deidara and Kakuzu. 

(6)
Hitomi loves ryokans, and tea.


She travels a lot, so she has made a hobby of visiting the best ryokans around. She loves onsen (hot springs) very much, and goes to them as much as possible. She also loves ocha (green tea), and knows a lot about it. She always has some good quality tea in her supplies.

(7)
She is a walking bingo book.


Hitomi is an excellent spy, and is known for having information on just about everything shady going on in the world. She knows most rogue ninja by name and appearance, as well as secret information about every village. But she doesn't gather this information on her own. The one who truly knows everything is Amaya, her partner. Whenever Hitomi needs information on someone or something, she turns to Amaya, who pretty much always has the answer. Amaya is even more mysterious than Hitomi, and so far, no one has acknowledged her existence other than Hitomi herself. Amaya is actually the biggest mystery in my comic, and not a lot of information will be given about her until Hitomi's back story. 

The combination of these two women makes the perfect informant. 

(8)
She is an exhibitionist.


Hitomi is very comfortable with her body and has no problem with showing it off. She also comes from a clan that generally wears less clothing. The clothing she wears is traditional to her clan. In the first chapter, Sasuke comes into her room just as she gets out of the shower. He questions her being in a towel, and she says he's the one who invaded her privacy. To get back at him, she changes right in front of him, knowing he would be horrified. She didn't do it to tempt him, but to make him uncomfortable, knowing he would feel embarrassed for her. Hitomi genuinely does not care if others see her naked form. She won't put herself in situations where she will be naked in front of others, but if someone were to walk in on her, she wouldn't care one bit. 

But Hitomi is not a slut. She isn't very experienced at all, in reality. Being revealing is not equal to being a whore. Hitomi is very aware of how to seduce others, but doesn't think that seducing men around her is always important. She just doesn't like to wear a lot of clothing most of the time. She also enjoys being barefoot, and keeping her hair down. 



(And a bonus fact is that she has insomnia. Instead of sleeping, she usually meditates, to allow her body to rest and recharge. Ninjas don't require as much sleep anyway.)


I am still keeping her other jutsus and background a secret, sorry! Hope you still enjoyed these! :D

~You can see more of Hitomi in my doujinshi, Chizome!~

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Instead of tagging specific people, how about we do it like this: If you see this and want to try it, tag me so I can see your journal! I would like to see more info on any of my watcher's ocs! :D Don't be shy, just go for it!





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Astrorella's avatar
Hitomi is really amazing and one of the best naruto ocs that I ever came across. She is traditional and not a MAry sue !

No one knows her true identity is an amazing fact because it adds more mystery to her :D.
I love how she is an exhibitionist, she is similar to my red haired Lamia because is also an exhbitionist and likes walking in her underwear in their appartment <3.
I can totally see Hitomi sparring  in the evening with Hikari because close combat is her weakness but Hitomi's strength :D!.